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~there is a reason for his odd name. I was trying to explain how Vulcans typically named their kids to some friends, or at least how I have observed them to do it anyways. I said they usually had names that started with S and ended with K for males, and then she joked about a Vulcan being named Spork. I then took it as a challenge to make Spork as legitimate of an OC as possible.~
Name: Spork
Rank: Commander
Current assignment: USS Arrival
Position: Medical Commander
Gender: Male
Age: 35
Race: Vulcan
Born: Stardate 2357
Birthplace: Vulcan
Height: 152 cm (5’)
Weight: 61.2 kg (130)
Eye color: Dark brown
Hair color/length: Short Dark gray Bowl cut
Facial hair: baby face
Age graduated SFA: 25
Major: Field Medicine
Minor: (undecided)
Medical History: No major illnesses, broken bones, or deformities aside from being on the smaller side
Blood type: AB+ (Or the vulcan equivalent)
Special Abilities: Unnaturally good at suppressing his emotions.
Spouse’s Name: Divorced
Mother’s name: Tavek
Father’s name: Sobak
Past assignments: The Command, Various starfleet bases and planet settlements
Hobbies: Reading, Collecting medical tools from various cultures
Talents: Quickly learns and adapts, has a fairly strong stomach
Personal History: Spork was born on Stardate 2357, A child the result of a Pon Farr ‘accident.’ His parent’s weren’t particularly phased by his birth, other than being a bit noticing of him being a small baby. As he grew and was taught the teachings of Surak, he found a greatly profound interest in them. Spork took an interest in joining Starfleet around the age of eight or nine, and was particularly enamored by science and medicine, with the former being his favorite studious subjects up until that point. With the blessing of his parents, he was allowed to enter the academy under the study of medicine. At the rather late age of 17, He underwent his first Pon Farr. He graduated the Starfleet Academy with honors at the age of 25, and joined the federation. He rather quickly got assigned to a Constitution-class ship called the Command to work as a doctor and EMT. He made a request to the captain to return to Vulcan to retrieve his bethrothed wife, T’kaan, which was granted as the planet would be on the way to where their current mission was taking them. After he returned to the planet, he found his wife had found favor instead with a Vulcan named Sa’kree. Because they never had any real emotional bond, Spork didn’t find logical reason to go through a Kali-Fee with Sa’kree. Ending it both, somewhat abrasively, on mutual terms, he left the planet once again and returned to the Command. After serving there for a few years and ranking up, he was offered the position of head Medical Commander aboard the Arrival. He took the position, and has served there since.

Hi, thanks for the submission! Sorry I’ve been busy for a while and couldn’t get around to it. ^^;
Okay guys, get ready for another round of Character Critique!
First off, his name. While it’s true that a lot of canon male Vulcans have names like S—-k, it’s not a hard and fast rule. For a list of canon Vulcan names, see here. Maybe that will give you some more ideas if you ever decide to change his name. :) Spork is funny, though!
Everything else looks good, except for one thing. My one issue is that his backstory with T’kaan, his betrothed, sounds an awful lot like Spock and T’Pring’s story. If I were you, I’d change that a bit so that it’s not so similar. (Also, how did Spork survive the blood fever if he did not participate in the Kali-Fee?)
Nice character! Good luck!

    ~there is a reason for his odd name. I was trying to explain how Vulcans typically named their kids to some friends, or at least how I have observed them to do it anyways. I said they usually had names that started with S and ended with K for males, and then she joked about a Vulcan being named Spork. I then took it as a challenge to make Spork as legitimate of an OC as possible.~

    Name: Spork

    Rank: Commander

    Current assignment: USS Arrival

    Position: Medical Commander

    Gender: Male

    Age: 35

    Race: Vulcan

    Born: Stardate 2357

    Birthplace: Vulcan

    Height: 152 cm (5’)

    Weight: 61.2 kg (130)

    Eye color: Dark brown

    Hair color/length: Short Dark gray Bowl cut

    Facial hair: baby face

    Age graduated SFA: 25

    Major: Field Medicine

    Minor: (undecided)

    Medical History: No major illnesses, broken bones, or deformities aside from being on the smaller side

    Blood type: AB+ (Or the vulcan equivalent)

    Special Abilities: Unnaturally good at suppressing his emotions.

    Spouse’s Name: Divorced

    Mother’s name: Tavek

    Father’s name: Sobak

    Past assignments: The Command, Various starfleet bases and planet settlements

    Hobbies: Reading, Collecting medical tools from various cultures

    Talents: Quickly learns and adapts, has a fairly strong stomach

    Personal History: Spork was born on Stardate 2357, A child the result of a Pon Farr ‘accident.’ His parent’s weren’t particularly phased by his birth, other than being a bit noticing of him being a small baby. As he grew and was taught the teachings of Surak, he found a greatly profound interest in them. Spork took an interest in joining Starfleet around the age of eight or nine, and was particularly enamored by science and medicine, with the former being his favorite studious subjects up until that point. With the blessing of his parents, he was allowed to enter the academy under the study of medicine. At the rather late age of 17, He underwent his first Pon Farr. He graduated the Starfleet Academy with honors at the age of 25, and joined the federation. He rather quickly got assigned to a Constitution-class ship called the Command to work as a doctor and EMT. He made a request to the captain to return to Vulcan to retrieve his bethrothed wife, T’kaan, which was granted as the planet would be on the way to where their current mission was taking them. After he returned to the planet, he found his wife had found favor instead with a Vulcan named Sa’kree. Because they never had any real emotional bond, Spork didn’t find logical reason to go through a Kali-Fee with Sa’kree. Ending it both, somewhat abrasively, on mutual terms, he left the planet once again and returned to the Command. After serving there for a few years and ranking up, he was offered the position of head Medical Commander aboard the Arrival. He took the position, and has served there since.

    Hi, thanks for the submission! Sorry I’ve been busy for a while and couldn’t get around to it. ^^;

    Okay guys, get ready for another round of Character Critique!

    First off, his name. While it’s true that a lot of canon male Vulcans have names like S—-k, it’s not a hard and fast rule. For a list of canon Vulcan names, see here. Maybe that will give you some more ideas if you ever decide to change his name. :) Spork is funny, though!

    Everything else looks good, except for one thing. My one issue is that his backstory with T’kaan, his betrothed, sounds an awful lot like Spock and T’Pring’s story. If I were you, I’d change that a bit so that it’s not so similar. (Also, how did Spork survive the blood fever if he did not participate in the Kali-Fee?)

    Nice character! Good luck!

  2. Anonymous said: If a Star Trek OC has powers like Dr. Who would the character be considered a Mary Sue?

    Maybe, not necessarily. It depends on what kind of powers, and what kind of species they’re supposed to be.

  3. OMQ I totally forgot I had this text file saved! What we have here is three separate versions of a character that was recently submitted to an RP group. When they weren’t accepted after two rounds of revisions, they ragequit. So here we go!

    VERSION 1:

    characters name: Gina, winchester
    age:23
    species:human
    back story:when she was young her family was attacked by bemoans both parents where killed in action so the the three siblings names where rainbow dash Winchester, glaez Winchester, john Winchester where all trained to hunt bad guys who where responsible for there parents killing. weapon: 4 pistols 2 on the boots 2 for hands
    quote: “why do we have to do this?”.

    Pretty obviously a Supernatural Sue, right? They were asked to make it a Star Trek OC, and this is what they came up with:

    VERSION 2:

    name:Gina, Winchester
    species:human
    age:23
    bio: she and her family joined star fleet for 22 years ago her dad is a general and commanding officer of u.s.s dark star and her mother is the nurse of the ships sickbay,her sister (rainbow dash Winchester) is a captain of the u.s.s shining fly for almost 2 years and her bothers (glaez and john Winchester) are manics for the star ship the u.s.s shining fly for 3 and a half years. weapons:4 pistols 2 on the boots and 2 for the hands.
    quote: “lets do this thing!”
    star ship: the u.s.s [[REDACTED]].

    Ahahah. Oh my. I still can’t get over “rainbow dash Winchester.” AND WHY THE PISTOLS, STILL. We have phasers here!

    VERSION 3:

    name: Jojo Winchester
    age:23.
    species:human.
    home town: new York city.
    birth place:LA, California. history: she and her family where from LA, California, at the age of 12 she and her family move to new York city her. father (Anthony Winchester) had joined the star fleet academy at the age of 18 and became an commanding officer of the u.s.s dark knight at the age of 34. her mother (Amy Winchester) had joined the star fleet academy at the age of 16 and be came the head nurse at the age of 21. her sister (Lilly Winchester the oldest sister) joined the star fleet academy at the age of 22 then became a captain of the u.s.s shining fly at the age of 33. her bothers (Jackson and Glaze Winchester) had both joined the star fleet academy at the age of 24 and became engineers of the star ship u.s.s shining fly at the age of 30.
    Likes: movies, loves to hang out with her bothers and sister, practices karate, and loves Japaneses food.
    things that she likes to do: reading, writing, drawing,doing math, running, like to help out with her community.
    quote: “i love helping out”

    WHO NAMES A KID “GLAZE”? Are they a donut? Where are his siblings, Powder and Sprinkles?

    I’m sorry. I’m in a horribly amused mood tonight.

  4. mr-snippy-herself said: Hey, could I possibly submit my vulcan boy here for a review? I've been looking for a few blogs to get a third-person's perspective but the ones I found either couldn't/ wouldn't do Star Trek Reviews.

    Sure!! :) I’d be happy to help!

  5. shakerattleandrolls said: It is alright to make a Star Trek character aesthetically pleasing, right? I've been curious about this because I see some character on Deviantart, and I've always noticed how attractive Hoshi Sato, Uhura, T'Pol and Shran's mate from Enterprise. I can't remember her name, but she was one of the prettiest Andorians I've ever seen.

    Oh yeah, that’s definitely okay. There are some conventionally hot people in canon. C:

  6. shakerattleandrolls said: God! Just looking through this blog makes me love Star Trek! And of course the Mary Sue's are always a plus. Thank you for existing!

    Ahaha! No, thank YOU, random citizen! ;D I’m glad my hard work can be appreciated.

  7. Anonymous said: I looked up the wolf Vulcan thing, the owner has a lot of equally poorly developed sues through their whole gallery. °~°

    Yeah, a lot of times Suethors have more than just one. Like potato chips!

  8. fuqspace:

You’ve Got the Con: THE STAR TREK ONLINE FAN CONVENTION IS ON!

When?: October 1st-8th
Where: http://youvegotthecon.tumblr.com
What?: You’ve Got the Con is an Online Star Trek Fan Convention
On October 1st You’ve Got the Con will open it’s cyber “doors” to the public for the first time to allow you, the fan, to connect, explore, and have fun like any other real life convention.
You’ve Got the Con is 100% FREE!!
However, if you would like to donate to help us with giveaways, prizes, programs, and graphics- you can purchase a "Badge Pack"  (Here)  You’ll receive a personalized Convention Badge to prove you participated in the first ever, completely online, Star Trek convention, a bracelet, a collectible star trek trading card, a small print from one of our artists and the code to play the Star Trek Dating Sim before it’s released!
What’s going to be there?:
Artist Alley
Art Show (Fan Art Contest)
Book Club
Concerts
Gaming Rooms
Masquerade
Role Playing Panels
Viewing Rooms
Contests
And More!…
Would you like to be a part of Artist Alley?
You’ve Got the Con would like to have as many artists as humanly possible! If you are interested in showing off your work (Please Message Us Here) for guide lines. 
Would you like to be a part of the Book Club?
You’ve Got the Con would like to have as many fanfics as humanly possible! If you are interested in showing off your work (Please Message Us Here) for guide lines. 
Would you like to be a part of the Concerts?
You’ve Got the Con would like to have as many fandom playlists as humanly possible! If you are interested in showing off your work (Please Message Us Here) for guide lines.
Contests:
For list of contests, please see this post.
We hope to see you soon! LIVE LONG AND PROSPER!


Check this out, peeps! :D Looks like it will be loads of fun!

    fuqspace:

    You’ve Got the Con: THE STAR TREK ONLINE FAN CONVENTION IS ON!

    When?: October 1st-8th

    Where: http://youvegotthecon.tumblr.com

    What?: You’ve Got the Con is an Online Star Trek Fan Convention

    On October 1st You’ve Got the Con will open it’s cyber “doors” to the public for the first time to allow you, the fan, to connect, explore, and have fun like any other real life convention.

    You’ve Got the Con is 100% FREE!!

    However, if you would like to donate to help us with giveaways, prizes, programs, and graphics- you can purchase a "Badge Pack"  (Here)  You’ll receive a personalized Convention Badge to prove you participated in the first ever, completely online, Star Trek convention, a bracelet, a collectible star trek trading card, a small print from one of our artists and the code to play the Star Trek Dating Sim before it’s released!

    What’s going to be there?:

    Artist Alley

    Art Show (Fan Art Contest)

    Book Club

    Concerts

    Gaming Rooms

    Masquerade

    Role Playing Panels

    Viewing Rooms

    Contests

    And More!…

    Would you like to be a part of Artist Alley?

    You’ve Got the Con would like to have as many artists as humanly possible! If you are interested in showing off your work (Please Message Us Here) for guide lines. 

    Would you like to be a part of the Book Club?

    You’ve Got the Con would like to have as many fanfics as humanly possible! If you are interested in showing off your work (Please Message Us Here) for guide lines. 

    Would you like to be a part of the Concerts?

    You’ve Got the Con would like to have as many fandom playlists as humanly possible! If you are interested in showing off your work (Please Message Us Here) for guide lines.

    Contests:

    For list of contests, please see this post.

    We hope to see you soon! LIVE LONG AND PROSPER!

    Check this out, peeps! :D Looks like it will be loads of fun!

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  10. 
"Her name’s Mioko. Her character is a little bit like the doctor (the 10th and 11th maybe a bit 9th as well. She has a lot of several personality traits). I will get back to that later.The most important thing is that she is a God. For a long time she got her power from the Q-continuum. Later she found out that she is the guardian of eternity and light. Protector of the entire universe. She brings peace and freedom to every world/realm/planet - but only if the inhabitants want her help.She is married to Data (yup :D ). Another duty of her is to protect “special souls”. These are lifeforms (mostly human) who have special skills or personality traits. For a “charge” (that’s the common description for the special souls) she would do anything. Mioko would die for her charges. The relationship between a guardian and a charge is very deep - it’s a sort of love but not in a romantic way. Mioko herself descripes it as a strong (sometimes the strongest) belt between two individuals. As soon as the belt is linked the two of them are bonded forever. Mioko has a lot of charges although it’s very unusual. Usually guardians have one, two or three charges but not more because it would be to stressful.Mioko lives in the Star Trek TNG time (now is the year 2410). But she can travel through time too. She visited captain Kirk and his crew a couple of times.She serves on the USS Enterprise F as the Chief of Security - under the command of Captain Data (a lot of times Mioko said to Data that she would always give him encouragement/guards his back. And now she is doing that also in a symbolic way because the position of the chief of security is on the bridge behind the captain).For Mioko Data is her other half and instead of calling him by his name she always says piece of gold or gold piece (because of his golden eyes).Now to her appearance:She has blue eyes and black hair (she “dyes” her hair black (don’t forget she has great power. So she don’t need a barber XD). Her natural hair color is gold/brunette)When she serves on the Enterprise she wears the golden uniform (like Worf in ST TNG). When Mioko has free time she usually wears black clothes like in the picture above - and of course a coat (she loves coats). Most of the time it is a black leather coat. 
Most of the time she has a very cheerful disposition but she can be quiet and compassionate as well. When children are around her she acts like a mother. She loves every form of life (like the doctor).So I think I have told you the most important stuff. There is so much more to tell. Maybe I will try to draw another picture as soon as I have time and then I will write more about Mioko and her family (and her dark past). We will see … .”

I’m… just… wow. Pulling off a Sue of this caliber is pretty impressive! Universe-bending phenomenal cosmic power: check. Inexplicably Japanese name: check. Canon love interest: check. Special snowflake syndrome: CHECK CHECK CHECKER-DECK.

    "Her name’s Mioko. Her character is a little bit like the doctor (the 10th and 11th maybe a bit 9th as well. She has a lot of several personality traits). I will get back to that later.
    The most important thing is that she is a God. For a long time she got her power from the Q-continuum. Later she found out that she is the guardian of eternity and light. Protector of the entire universe. She brings peace and freedom to every world/realm/planet - but only if the inhabitants want her help.
    She is married to Data (yup :D ). Another duty of her is to protect “special souls”. These are lifeforms (mostly human) who have special skills or personality traits. For a “charge” (that’s the common description for the special souls) she would do anything. Mioko would die for her charges. The relationship between a guardian and a charge is very deep - it’s a sort of love but not in a romantic way. Mioko herself descripes it as a strong (sometimes the strongest) belt between two individuals. As soon as the belt is linked the two of them are bonded forever. Mioko has a lot of charges although it’s very unusual. Usually guardians have one, two or three charges but not more because it would be to stressful.
    Mioko lives in the Star Trek TNG time (now is the year 2410). But she can travel through time too. She visited captain Kirk and his crew a couple of times.
    She serves on the USS Enterprise F as the Chief of Security - under the command of Captain Data (a lot of times Mioko said to Data that she would always give him encouragement/guards his back. And now she is doing that also in a symbolic way because the position of the chief of security is on the bridge behind the captain).
    For Mioko Data is her other half and instead of calling him by his name she always says piece of gold or gold piece (because of his golden eyes).

    Now to her appearance:
    She has blue eyes and black hair (she “dyes” her hair black (don’t forget she has great power. So she don’t need a barber XD). Her natural hair color is gold/brunette)
    When she serves on the Enterprise she wears the golden uniform (like Worf in ST TNG). When Mioko has free time she usually wears black clothes like in the picture above - and of course a coat (she loves coats). Most of the time it is a black leather coat.

    Most of the time she has a very cheerful disposition but she can be quiet and compassionate as well. When children are around her she acts like a mother. She loves every form of life (like the doctor).

    So I think I have told you the most important stuff. There is so much more to tell. Maybe I will try to draw another picture as soon as I have time and then I will write more about Mioko and her family (and her dark past). We will see … .”

    I’m… just… wow. Pulling off a Sue of this caliber is pretty impressive! Universe-bending phenomenal cosmic power: check. Inexplicably Japanese name: check. Canon love interest: check. Special snowflake syndrome: CHECK CHECK CHECKER-DECK.

  11. Anonymous said: I don't speak English so I don't think I'm explaining this right

    Well, you obviously speak SOME English, or you have a really good translator! ;)

    I’m not trying to argue with you or anything. It’s just advice, that’s all. You don’t have to follow it.